Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Colorless Combatants

Another one i wrote a while back but am not completely satisfied with.  I feel i didn't convey what i wanted well enough but i attempted.

A field of Sapphire
Stretched beyond mortal vision
The Somme dwarfed
Only Armageddon akin.

The sharp purity of the place
A blue so wild and savage
Polished gemstones compare not
Human Touch cannot damage.

The loss of light
Robs the gems of vigorous soul
Darkness engulfs the field
Sapphires turn to Coal

But fear not!
The shadowy void is brief
Light sheds the sinister cloak
The coal causes no more grief

This perfect place
Is Fouled by the stench of War
Brought without reason
Forever thirsting for more.

The armies have no leaders
No captain, no general
Every warrior free
Each to their own call.

The gladiators battle
Using ethereal blades
Cutting and slashing ravenously
Until each flees or fades.

These combatants are brothers
All decked in white
Related by nature
But fiercely they fight

Some warriors will lose themselves
Become locked up inside
Their armor will turn a murky black
The need for another to confide

The black ones will fight
But without soul or courage
Emotion must be freed
Or fear perpetual rage

The fields are engaged
Full of colorless combatants
Brothers and strangers
A legend of Decadence

The Lamp

I will start my blog with this poem I wrote about six months ago after a particular emotional time in my life, The Lamp.


Do you see me?
In the corner
In the dust
The loner.

A simple thing
Only cheap plastic,
Not very notable
Nothing fantastic

When help is needed
I am there,
Always will be
But how many care?

For a minute
You need a hand,
But when finished
In the corner I stand.

The light inside me
Has died
I can no longer help
I abide.

I am the lamp
With a dead light
Do you fix me?
Yeah right.

The Beginning

Welcome,

These are my poems.  I write them sporadically, sometimes with inspiration, others with none.  Some are good and some are bad.  You may find them dark or you may find them optimistic, it is all up to the interpretation of the reader.  I may have my own thoughts about what my poem means to me but that does not make it right.  Poetry has no defined meaning.  Poetry is there for everyone to discover meaning for themselves so please, comment and leave your thoughts about these writings of mine.  I promise they are all relatively short and will take no more than a minute or two to read each.

I will put my poems up as I write them but i am not delegated to a particular schedule.  This is a hobby I do in my free time and I put these out here for you to enjoy.  If you hate them, fine.  It is your opinion.  I am OK with receiving hate comments about these poems because, again, each poem means something different to everyone.

Enjoy, if you will.

-Abyssal Poet